I missed that part of footnote 3, it does seem to address a lot of what I said. I appreciate your response.
I do think the vast majority of people will not read footnote 3, so it’s important for the main body of the text (and the visuals) to give the right impression. This means comparing averages to averages, or possible tail events to possible tail events. It sounds like this is your plan now, and if so that’s great!
Hey, just a quick comment to say something like this line of objection is discussed in footnote 3.
I’m going to propose the following further edits:
Compare with terrorism deaths over 50 years from 1970.
Mention HIV/AIDS in the main text and some other tweaks.
Add further discussion in the footnote.
I missed that part of footnote 3, it does seem to address a lot of what I said. I appreciate your response.
I do think the vast majority of people will not read footnote 3, so it’s important for the main body of the text (and the visuals) to give the right impression. This means comparing averages to averages, or possible tail events to possible tail events. It sounds like this is your plan now, and if so that’s great!