Hey! I think you’d get more of the right people engaging with this if you shared a bit more detail (people are very unlikely to click on a link without knowing what to expect). I.e. - share that you are in Nigeria, you’re talking about TaRL, include the 70% of kids fact (that was great), and then outline your proposed intervention, and how the reader can help. The title is also a little too vague- maybe title based on a more specific ask?
Thanks so much, Toby — that’s very helpful feedback! You’re right — I should have included more upfront context. I have edited it, and I have updated the title as well.
Hey! I think you’d get more of the right people engaging with this if you shared a bit more detail (people are very unlikely to click on a link without knowing what to expect).
I.e. - share that you are in Nigeria, you’re talking about TaRL, include the 70% of kids fact (that was great), and then outline your proposed intervention, and how the reader can help.
The title is also a little too vague- maybe title based on a more specific ask?
Thanks so much, Toby — that’s very helpful feedback! You’re right — I should have included more upfront context. I have edited it, and I have updated the title as well.
Thanks again.
Awesome—thanks!