I quite liked it! I left some comments, but I found it an engaging novel overall. I liked the different perspectives given by the characters who opposed Isaac’s views in pretty reasonable ways, and how EA views were mentioned without getting too preachy.
Plus, I liked how the novel evoked the overall essence or vibe of cultivation novels without getting too lost in the weeds, as well as the well-developed military theory of cultivation warfare the characters had. Overall I quite enjoyed the novel both as an intro to EA concepts and on its own merits.
It could certainly use another editing pass or two for grammar, but I think it has fantastic potential!
I quite liked it! I left some comments, but I found it an engaging novel overall. I liked the different perspectives given by the characters who opposed Isaac’s views in pretty reasonable ways, and how EA views were mentioned without getting too preachy.
Plus, I liked how the novel evoked the overall essence or vibe of cultivation novels without getting too lost in the weeds, as well as the well-developed military theory of cultivation warfare the characters had. Overall I quite enjoyed the novel both as an intro to EA concepts and on its own merits.
It could certainly use another editing pass or two for grammar, but I think it has fantastic potential!