The wording there is also more deontological than I’m happy with, but I do want to try to find phrasing that resonates for more justice-oriented people. Any ideas for better ways of phrasing this?
Well, the problem with optimizing for a specific target audience is the risk to put off other audiences. I would say something like:
Being born with advantages isn’t something to feel guilty about. Being born with advantages is something to be glad about: it gives you that much more power to improve life for everyone.
The wording there is also more deontological than I’m happy with, but I do want to try to find phrasing that resonates for more justice-oriented people. Any ideas for better ways of phrasing this?
Well, the problem with optimizing for a specific target audience is the risk to put off other audiences. I would say something like:
Being born with advantages isn’t something to feel guilty about. Being born with advantages is something to be glad about: it gives you that much more power to improve life for everyone.