It is great that you base your arguments on other people’s research. Then add a sentence or two clarifying it (in addition, this would add some information on the values you used). All these are very speculative still, but this is not the issue -though it could be mentioned.
The issue with your post is that you claim something you do not demonstrate at all. If you’d framed the post as something similar to “Replacing chicken meat with beef or pork: pain vs emissions analysis”, your post would be really very good. I still think you should add some description to the values used, but just including the reference from RP would probably suffice for this. And if it’d include the information that replacing chicken with no-meat does not move the needle nearly as much as replacing it for beef or pork, it would be even better, as this is very relevant context.
But this is not what you do. You have done very interesting and useful calculations. But your claims go much, much further than what you can claim with them. You narrow your analysis to a comparison of two specific aspects of the issue, basically neglecting the rest. I hope you see that the issue goes beyond pain and emissions. You most likely think that these two aspects are the most important ones for the analysis but do no support -or even mention- this. Doing it would probably clarify the values behind your analysis—if you really want to go broad. Or you could just say sth like “assuming pain and emissions are the driving aspects of this problem...”. But do not even do this.
A stupid example. There’s people who care mostly about the amount of pleasure in the universe and (claim) not to care much for suffering. Assuming chickens get some pleasure at all in their lives, the amount of pleasure in the universe would increase by eating more chicken and less pork or beef. Even if they currently wouldn’t experience any pleasure, the potential would be huge… and the analysis completely opposite to yours. And this is not taking into account any other aspects than animal pleasure.
I am sure you see all this, and that you wanted to write as short an essay as possible. But to do this, then you have to be very specific—otherwise, a very good analysis like yours ends up not holding the water you claim it holds.
Hi Vasco, merry Christmas and so on!
It is great that you base your arguments on other people’s research. Then add a sentence or two clarifying it (in addition, this would add some information on the values you used). All these are very speculative still, but this is not the issue -though it could be mentioned.
The issue with your post is that you claim something you do not demonstrate at all. If you’d framed the post as something similar to “Replacing chicken meat with beef or pork: pain vs emissions analysis”, your post would be really very good. I still think you should add some description to the values used, but just including the reference from RP would probably suffice for this. And if it’d include the information that replacing chicken with no-meat does not move the needle nearly as much as replacing it for beef or pork, it would be even better, as this is very relevant context.
But this is not what you do. You have done very interesting and useful calculations. But your claims go much, much further than what you can claim with them. You narrow your analysis to a comparison of two specific aspects of the issue, basically neglecting the rest. I hope you see that the issue goes beyond pain and emissions. You most likely think that these two aspects are the most important ones for the analysis but do no support -or even mention- this. Doing it would probably clarify the values behind your analysis—if you really want to go broad. Or you could just say sth like “assuming pain and emissions are the driving aspects of this problem...”. But do not even do this.
A stupid example. There’s people who care mostly about the amount of pleasure in the universe and (claim) not to care much for suffering. Assuming chickens get some pleasure at all in their lives, the amount of pleasure in the universe would increase by eating more chicken and less pork or beef. Even if they currently wouldn’t experience any pleasure, the potential would be huge… and the analysis completely opposite to yours. And this is not taking into account any other aspects than animal pleasure.
I am sure you see all this, and that you wanted to write as short an essay as possible. But to do this, then you have to be very specific—otherwise, a very good analysis like yours ends up not holding the water you claim it holds.