Have you considered hiring a designer for this document? It doesn’t look good at all and is filled up with bold faces all over the place.
Why is it so long? I don’t see why it’s important for vegans to know that cows are supplemented with vitamin B12.
It could have benefited a lot from lists of key takeaways. For instance, do you need to take vitamin D3 supplementation, and how much? Much of the document feels like an info dump to me.
Hey, just to note that this comes across as unnecessarily, and unfairly, negative to me—I think you could have made the same points in a more collaborative and constructive way.
Some comments:
Have you considered hiring a designer for this document? It doesn’t look good at all and is filled up with bold faces all over the place.
Why is it so long? I don’t see why it’s important for vegans to know that cows are supplemented with vitamin B12.
It could have benefited a lot from lists of key takeaways. For instance, do you need to take vitamin D3 supplementation, and how much? Much of the document feels like an info dump to me.
Hey, just to note that this comes across as unnecessarily, and unfairly, negative to me—I think you could have made the same points in a more collaborative and constructive way.