Yeah idk, this just seems like a really weird nitpick, given that you both like Holly’s work...? I’m presenting a subjective claim to begin with: “Holly’s track record is stellar”, as based on my evaluation of what’s written in the application plus external context.
If you think this shouldn’t be funded, I’d really appreciate the reasoning; but I otherwise don’t see anything I would change about my summary.
Yeah idk, this just seems like a really weird nitpick, given that you both like Holly’s work...? I’m presenting a subjective claim to begin with: “Holly’s track record is stellar”, as based on my evaluation of what’s written in the application plus external context.
If you think this shouldn’t be funded, I’d really appreciate the reasoning; but I otherwise don’t see anything I would change about my summary.