I like this sort of initiative, thanks for sharing your draft!
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This document is being made public for the purposes of openness and to general comments, critique, and discussion. It is unfinished at this time. If you leave a substantive comment, have suggestions, etc, please leave your name in the comments so you can be credited with your contribution.
In order to make this fair (i.e. not “cheating” by eliciting comments) and to encourage others to collaborate without reservation, I am forgoing my portion of any prize money that may be received from this essay (save for a reasonable time reimbursement for working time on this). Any contributors and collaborators have a say in which charities the remaining portion of the prize money will go. The goal is simply to make the best essay possible to address these issues by encouraging many contributors, regardless of winning or losing a prize money. The important part is making change.
I like this sort of initiative, thanks for sharing your draft!
To encourage more reviews, you may want to briefly summarise your claims on your post, and note that:
Good idea, thanks! I’ll edit it in in a moment.