Watching it yet again, I think it would feel more right if the guy where not so easily convinced, but instead it ended with him, being “hm, that sounds promising, I’m going to learn some more”.
Both the puppet really felt like real people with actual personalty to me, up until t=1:57. But then the guy just complexly changes his mind which broke my suspense of disbelief. I think that’s the point when mostly started to sound like “yet another commercial”.
Thanks for the thoughtful feedback Linda, and for taking the time to watch the video so many times! I appreciate it!
It’s all good food for thought and I’m going to mull on it. I have to say I agree with your last point that when the purple character suddenly accepts TLYCS and changes his mind it feels too easy and unrealistic. This has been bugging me too, but I only noticed it when it was too late to change! Still, it’s all good learning and hopefully the next project like this I work on I’ll be able to use what I’ve learned to good effect :)
Watching it yet again, I think it would feel more right if the guy where not so easily convinced, but instead it ended with him, being “hm, that sounds promising, I’m going to learn some more”.
Both the puppet really felt like real people with actual personalty to me, up until t=1:57. But then the guy just complexly changes his mind which broke my suspense of disbelief. I think that’s the point when mostly started to sound like “yet another commercial”.
Thanks for the thoughtful feedback Linda, and for taking the time to watch the video so many times! I appreciate it!
It’s all good food for thought and I’m going to mull on it. I have to say I agree with your last point that when the purple character suddenly accepts TLYCS and changes his mind it feels too easy and unrealistic. This has been bugging me too, but I only noticed it when it was too late to change! Still, it’s all good learning and hopefully the next project like this I work on I’ll be able to use what I’ve learned to good effect :)
Thanks again for your time and consideration!