This post would benefit from heeding its own advice to “Repeat your main points. Summarize your main points. Use section headers and bullet points and numbered lists. Color-highlight and number-subscript the same word when it’s used in different contexts (“apple1 is not apple2″).”
In particular, in this post is no clear summary or conclusion and the most concrete action (a list of suggestions) is somewhat buried in the middle and not referred to in the rest of the post. That list could have bullet points or numbers to make it clearer.
This post would benefit from heeding its own advice to “Repeat your main points. Summarize your main points. Use section headers and bullet points and numbered lists. Color-highlight and number-subscript the same word when it’s used in different contexts (“apple1 is not apple2″).”
In particular, in this post is no clear summary or conclusion and the most concrete action (a list of suggestions) is somewhat buried in the middle and not referred to in the rest of the post. That list could have bullet points or numbers to make it clearer.
Good points, thanks! (Mainly the list part)