even as someone interested in hearing what you had to say, your writing could be formatted to let me skim it more efficiently. I’d have loved if you posted more visible TL;DRs at the start & named the sections by their conclusions rather than their guiding questions.
The teaser video worked on me as you predicted though, props on that!
This also makes for a distinctive cover letter to the OP job, to be sure! Smart.
Small feedback on your essay itself:
even as someone interested in hearing what you had to say, your writing could be formatted to let me skim it more efficiently. I’d have loved if you posted more visible TL;DRs at the start & named the sections by their conclusions rather than their guiding questions.
The teaser video worked on me as you predicted though, props on that!
This also makes for a distinctive cover letter to the OP job, to be sure! Smart.
This is great meta-feedback—I’ll be sure to include more TL;DRs at the start of my articles too.