I like the stylized illustrations but I think a bit more realism (or at least detail) could be helpful. Some of the activities and pain suffered by the chickens was hard to see.
The transition to the factory farm/caged chickens environment was dramatic and the impact I think you were seeking.
One fact-based question which I don’t have the answer to—does this really depict the conditions for chickens where the eggs are labeled as “pasture raised?” I hope so, but I vaguely heard that that was not a rigorously enforced label.
Enjoyed it, a good start.
I like the stylized illustrations but I think a bit more realism (or at least detail) could be helpful. Some of the activities and pain suffered by the chickens was hard to see.
The transition to the factory farm/caged chickens environment was dramatic and the impact I think you were seeking.
One fact-based question which I don’t have the answer to—does this really depict the conditions for chickens where the eggs are labeled as “pasture raised?” I hope so, but I vaguely heard that that was not a rigorously enforced label.