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I edited the post in accordance with your comment; thanks for commenting on how I can improve! It genuinely helped and pointed out things I didn’t know until you mentioned them.
1. Do you think I should do any more editing in accordance with your comment?
2. Do you have any other feedback?
3. Generally, anything else?