Regarding the first potential change: It seems to me helpful (consider also “inclined” → “inclined/able”). Regarding the second one, I was not sure at first that “resign” here means ceasing to follow through after having taken the pledge.
For both changes, consider wording it such that it’s clear that we should consider the runway / financial situation factors over a person’s entire life (rather than just their current plans and financial situation) and the substantial uncertainties that are involved.
Regarding the first potential change: It seems to me helpful (consider also “inclined” → “inclined/able”). Regarding the second one, I was not sure at first that “resign” here means ceasing to follow through after having taken the pledge.
For both changes, consider wording it such that it’s clear that we should consider the runway / financial situation factors over a person’s entire life (rather than just their current plans and financial situation) and the substantial uncertainties that are involved.