Hi Roman, I really like your post, the idea of experimenting with telling each other about random samples of our daily lives. Something that is more likely to bring people together than the slickly curated Instagram posts. It’s a very worthwhile thing to try and achieve, and you seem to be succeeding in it—so well done there!
However, the title of your post doesn’t seem to have anything to do with the actual content. I read your post expecting to find something about cognitive biases, for example, and groupthink, based on that title. Could you maybe consider giving your post a title which better reflects the content? Then you will be more likely to reach the readers you want to have a conversation with about it.
Hi Roman, I really like your post, the idea of experimenting with telling each other about random samples of our daily lives. Something that is more likely to bring people together than the slickly curated Instagram posts. It’s a very worthwhile thing to try and achieve, and you seem to be succeeding in it—so well done there!
However, the title of your post doesn’t seem to have anything to do with the actual content. I read your post expecting to find something about cognitive biases, for example, and groupthink, based on that title. Could you maybe consider giving your post a title which better reflects the content? Then you will be more likely to reach the readers you want to have a conversation with about it.
All the best!
Thanks for the helpful advice! Can I use your outside perspective again to say if the new topic is better?
Yes, much better.