A quick comment after reading about 50% of this article: it seems to focus on statements instead of arguments, e.g. “we cannot calculate the probability of future events as if people didn’t exist.” or “We are after genuine creativity, not the illusion of creativity.”At the same time, it doesn’t really engage with the literature on AI risk or even explain why the definitions adopted e.g. the knowledge definition, are the most appropriate ones. There might be some interesting thoughts in there, but it’d be better for the author to develop them in shorter articles and make the arguments more clear.
I agree, my essay was tackling a lot. A series of short articles would be a better approach. But this was for the Future Fund Worldview Prize and they required one essay introducing a worldview. I may choose you’re approach in the future.
A quick comment after reading about 50% of this article: it seems to focus on statements instead of arguments, e.g. “we cannot calculate the probability of future events as if people didn’t exist.” or “We are after genuine creativity, not the illusion of creativity.”At the same time, it doesn’t really engage with the literature on AI risk or even explain why the definitions adopted e.g. the knowledge definition, are the most appropriate ones. There might be some interesting thoughts in there, but it’d be better for the author to develop them in shorter articles and make the arguments more clear.
I agree, my essay was tackling a lot. A series of short articles would be a better approach. But this was for the Future Fund Worldview Prize and they required one essay introducing a worldview. I may choose you’re approach in the future.
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