I am quite confused why you decided to post this here. As kbog correctly pointed out, this just reads like a normal news article on something that seems somewhat relevant to EA, but not clearly. If you are looking for feedback on your writing, I could imagine people being happy to help, but this just being posted without much context feels strange to me.
I am quite confused why you decided to post this here. As kbog correctly pointed out, this just reads like a normal news article on something that seems somewhat relevant to EA, but not clearly. If you are looking for feedback on your writing, I could imagine people being happy to help, but this just being posted without much context feels strange to me.