I agree with Richard and Will’s comments that the tone of the post is very allegation-y (and not very question-y). In light of this, I’ve edited my comment so that it ends with “the tone wasn’t right” instead of “the tone wasn’t quite right”.
I agree with Richard and Will’s comments that the tone of the post is very allegation-y (and not very question-y). In light of this, I’ve edited my comment so that it ends with “the tone wasn’t right” instead of “the tone wasn’t quite right”.