Groundwater depletion is an important topic, and I’m glad you’re bringing attention to it.
EDIT: after reading the white paper, I agree with Corentin that the presentation of the information contained needs a bit of a rewrite. I can see that your organization was commissioned to produce a national security report, but reading through the document, I think you need:
Groundwater depletion is an important topic, and I’m glad you’re bringing attention to it.
EDIT: after reading the white paper, I agree with Corentin that the presentation of the information contained needs a bit of a rewrite. I can see that your organization was commissioned to produce a national security report, but reading through the document, I think you need:
a well-defined target audience.
advice on formatting and information graphics
a recipe for business presentation documents.
a rewrite and a good editor
proper citations or “citations on request”.
testing on actual readers.