I agree that this article is written in a very confusing way. Particularly this paragraph, which introduced many new ‘things’ into the article, without anchoring them soon enough:
”Suppose that, after a tree falls, the two arguers walk into the forest together. Will one expect to see the tree fallen to the right, and the other expect to see the tree fallen to the left? Suppose that before the tree falls, the two leave a sound recorder next to the tree. Would one, playing back the recorder, expect to hear something different from the other? Suppose they attach an electroencephalograph to any brain in the world; would one expect to see a different trace than the other?”
This would have been much easier to read with an added sentence:
”Suppose that, after a tree falls, the two arguers walk into the forest together. Will they expect any different sensory experience from eachother? Will one expect to see the tree fallen to the right, and one...”
I agree that this article is written in a very confusing way. Particularly this paragraph, which introduced many new ‘things’ into the article, without anchoring them soon enough:
”Suppose that, after a tree falls, the two arguers walk into the forest together. Will one expect to see the tree fallen to the right, and the other expect to see the tree fallen to the left? Suppose that before the tree falls, the two leave a sound recorder next to the tree. Would one, playing back the recorder, expect to hear something different from the other? Suppose they attach an electroencephalograph to any brain in the world; would one expect to see a different trace than the other?”
This would have been much easier to read with an added sentence:
”Suppose that, after a tree falls, the two arguers walk into the forest together. Will they expect any different sensory experience from eachother? Will one expect to see the tree fallen to the right, and one...”