Congrats for this talk, I’ve found it very convincing. There is a really good balance between the argumentative side and the emotional one.
A few ideas that could potentially improve it:
- Maybe you can imagine some ways to make it more participative, by asking people intuition about one case on an other for instance. - When you explain some arguments, it goes quite fast. Maybe it can be hard to follow for someone who does not know a lot about WAS. Two ways to potentially improve it: 1- make a recap at the end with the main arguments 2- When you explain something hard put the structure on your ppw. Nonetheless, it is likely that insisting to much on the argumentative approach affects the balance emotion/​argument of your presentation. - As the end of the presentation, you feel chocked/​depressed, maybe it could help to offer to audience easy ways to contribue at their scale: donate to X or Y charity//​ Put some water on their balcony//​ Volunteer for X or Y charity//​ Probably far better advices than I’m giving.
Hope it can help, congrats again for the quality of your work.
Heya,
Congrats for this talk, I’ve found it very convincing. There is a really good balance between the argumentative side and the emotional one.
A few ideas that could potentially improve it:
- Maybe you can imagine some ways to make it more participative, by asking people intuition about one case on an other for instance.
- When you explain some arguments, it goes quite fast. Maybe it can be hard to follow for someone who does not know a lot about WAS. Two ways to potentially improve it: 1- make a recap at the end with the main arguments 2- When you explain something hard put the structure on your ppw.
Nonetheless, it is likely that insisting to much on the argumentative approach affects the balance emotion/​argument of your presentation.
- As the end of the presentation, you feel chocked/​depressed, maybe it could help to offer to audience easy ways to contribue at their scale: donate to X or Y charity//​ Put some water on their balcony//​ Volunteer for X or Y charity//​ Probably far better advices than I’m giving.
Hope it can help, congrats again for the quality of your work.