The section on cortical oscillations suggests cortical oscillations may track the subjective experience of time and that we could measure their frequencies across animals. It seems like it pretty directly puts forward a hypothesis that would support (or refute) the thesis, conditional on the hypothesis holding, with a citation to support the hypothesis. Your criticism on this point seems wrong to me.
The section on cortical oscillations suggests cortical oscillations may track the subjective experience of time and that we could measure their frequencies across animals. It seems like it pretty directly puts forward a hypothesis that would support (or refute) the thesis, conditional on the hypothesis holding, with a citation to support the hypothesis. Your criticism on this point seems wrong to me.