FWIW, I also “walked into an argument half-way through”, and for me, the section “What do EA vegan advocates need to do?” was very useful to get a better sense of what exactly you were arguing for—you could consider putting a Tldr version of it at the beginning of the article.
FWIW, I also “walked into an argument half-way through”, and for me, the section “What do EA vegan advocates need to do?” was very useful to get a better sense of what exactly you were arguing for—you could consider putting a Tldr version of it at the beginning of the article.