Yeah, it starts out looking too much like an ad for Gitcoin, when it would be better to describe who created the whatever-it-is, for whom it was created, and what people will get out of it.
My first thought is that Gitcoin would have been better described later, and as a clause, e.g. instead of a “Gitcoin” section, saying “Gitcoin is on a mission to grow open source...” you have a paragraph like “we built the quiz on Gitcoin, which is on a mission to grow open source...” because readers can’t see why they should read about Gitcoin in isolation.
It is odd that there is a section to explain what EA is—we are on EA forum, readers normally know already what EA is.
Why should people who are not Gitcoin members care about kudos?
Why do we need a Github account, is this meant for programmers?
Why do we need a browser extension?
The post needs to be structured so that the reader quickly gets a clue about what they would get out of reading the whole post, and for any instructions you give us, we need to be given a motivation to do it that we understand.
Upvoted because I think a negative score is too harsh… yet I don’t understand this well enough to be motivated to install a browser extension. Based on the existence of a section to explain what EA is, I assume this is designed for people who are new to EA, which I am not, so I deduce that I would get nothing out of it.
Yeah, it starts out looking too much like an ad for Gitcoin, when it would be better to describe who created the whatever-it-is, for whom it was created, and what people will get out of it.
My first thought is that Gitcoin would have been better described later, and as a clause, e.g. instead of a “Gitcoin” section, saying “Gitcoin is on a mission to grow open source...” you have a paragraph like “we built the quiz on Gitcoin, which is on a mission to grow open source...” because readers can’t see why they should read about Gitcoin in isolation.
It is odd that there is a section to explain what EA is—we are on EA forum, readers normally know already what EA is.
Why should people who are not Gitcoin members care about kudos?
Why do we need a Github account, is this meant for programmers?
Why do we need a browser extension?
The post needs to be structured so that the reader quickly gets a clue about what they would get out of reading the whole post, and for any instructions you give us, we need to be given a motivation to do it that we understand.
Upvoted because I think a negative score is too harsh… yet I don’t understand this well enough to be motivated to install a browser extension. Based on the existence of a section to explain what EA is, I assume this is designed for people who are new to EA, which I am not, so I deduce that I would get nothing out of it.