Thanks for the feedback! I think this is probably a failure of the story more than a failure of your understanding—after all, a story that’s hard to understand isn’t fulfilling its purpose very well. Jackson Wagner’s comment below is a good summary of the main points I was intending to get across.
Next time I write, I’ll try to be more clear about the points I’m trying to convey.
Thanks for the feedback! I think this is probably a failure of the story more than a failure of your understanding—after all, a story that’s hard to understand isn’t fulfilling its purpose very well. Jackson Wagner’s comment below is a good summary of the main points I was intending to get across.
Next time I write, I’ll try to be more clear about the points I’m trying to convey.