I didn’t read the entire article, but overall I thought it was alright. I thought your definition of shallow should have been more flushed out and to me that just took away from everything else. I think all comments add value.
So close, yet so far! By ending your comment with a question and a smiley face, you missed “disengaged” and “prickly”! But keep trying, I know you’ve got this in you :P
I didn’t read the entire article, but overall I thought it was alright. I thought your definition of shallow should have been more flushed out and to me that just took away from everything else. I think all comments add value.
Did I get them all? :D
So close, yet so far! By ending your comment with a question and a smiley face, you missed “disengaged” and “prickly”! But keep trying, I know you’ve got this in you :P