Hey Gerry! It sounds like your organisation is working on a really important demographic in potentially a very cost-effective way! I think your application would be more compelling to potential funders if it included answers to the following:
What other funding is being used for this project? Presumably you also have staff to pay etc
This would help donors understand the full cost of supporting a widow right now. If this isn’t apparent, most donors will think it’s much much higher because if something is missing they tend to assume the worst.
What are your ambitions for the future?
Most of the impact of a grant like this is often in supporting an organisation that will grow into something more impactful over time. EA donors especially care about this, and want to know your longer term plans if possible.
How would your outputs differ without an office?
It’s not clear what the $5k itself would buy in terms of additional widows being supported. This, “the counterfactual difference in utility” is the primary thing EA donors think about when deciding to donate.
If you take away one thing let it be this: anything left unclear or unspecified will be interpreted more negatively than if it had been clearly stated. For this reason, you might also want to include an organisational budget and more details on exactly what you’re teaching / how you’re supporting people with their mental health.
That being said, there are some great things about this application:
The length is right for the size of the grant
its written in plain English, which is much more persuasive than any alternative.
It’s great that it’s being led by the demographic it intends to serve!
It does seem like the costs are low and the potential impact is high, which is exactly what EA funders are looking for.
I’d be happy to spend 30 mins helping you work on your application if you’d like (for free). I’ve been successful in raising money for mental health work in LMICs over the past few years. If that’d be helpful, drop me a message or just leave a comment and I’ll reach out by email :)
Hey Gerry! It sounds like your organisation is working on a really important demographic in potentially a very cost-effective way! I think your application would be more compelling to potential funders if it included answers to the following:
What other funding is being used for this project? Presumably you also have staff to pay etc
This would help donors understand the full cost of supporting a widow right now. If this isn’t apparent, most donors will think it’s much much higher because if something is missing they tend to assume the worst.
What are your ambitions for the future?
Most of the impact of a grant like this is often in supporting an organisation that will grow into something more impactful over time. EA donors especially care about this, and want to know your longer term plans if possible.
How would your outputs differ without an office?
It’s not clear what the $5k itself would buy in terms of additional widows being supported. This, “the counterfactual difference in utility” is the primary thing EA donors think about when deciding to donate.
If you take away one thing let it be this: anything left unclear or unspecified will be interpreted more negatively than if it had been clearly stated. For this reason, you might also want to include an organisational budget and more details on exactly what you’re teaching / how you’re supporting people with their mental health.
That being said, there are some great things about this application:
The length is right for the size of the grant
its written in plain English, which is much more persuasive than any alternative.
It’s great that it’s being led by the demographic it intends to serve!
It does seem like the costs are low and the potential impact is high, which is exactly what EA funders are looking for.
I’d be happy to spend 30 mins helping you work on your application if you’d like (for free). I’ve been successful in raising money for mental health work in LMICs over the past few years. If that’d be helpful, drop me a message or just leave a comment and I’ll reach out by email :)
Hey John,
I highly welcome your technical support. MA Gerry