To be completely honest I think the new title—mainly the “worth it”—is actually worse: That’s a phrase you would use if you are intentionally choosing to create global warming. (It’s also somewhat flippant.)
I would recommend something simple like “Some global warming can reduce the risk of mass starvation from abrupt sunlight reduction scenarios.”
I think having the split bullet is probably good, though.
To be completely honest I think the new title—mainly the “worth it”—is actually worse: That’s a phrase you would use if you are intentionally choosing to create global warming. (It’s also somewhat flippant.)
I would recommend something simple like “Some global warming can reduce the risk of mass starvation from abrupt sunlight reduction scenarios.”
I think having the split bullet is probably good, though.
Thanks! I have updated the title to:
I have:
Replaced “worth it” by “good”, which sounds less flippant to me.
Added the term “food shocks” to clarify the risk from ASRSs I am referring to.
Replaced “Some” by “More” to clarify I mean additional global warming may be good (instead of just the level of warming we are heading to).