Vasco Grilo🔸 comments on Cost-effectiveness of the fish welfare interventions recommended by Ambitious Impact, and Fish Welfare Initiative’s farm program

[Vasco Grilo🔸]

Hi Michael,

I discuss that from the following sentence on.

FWI says “most additional funding right now supports our R&D [research and development] work [not their farm program], which will enable us to become more cost-effective in the future”. [...]

[Michael St Jules 🔸]

FWIW, it seems a bit too buried in text. I think this would be something to say upfront, e.g. in the summary, if you’re critiquing an org, because readers will often just skim, like I did.

[Vasco Grilo🔸]

Thanks, Michael. I have added 2 sentences to the start of the last bullet of the summary.

• FWI says “most additional funding right now supports our R&D [research and development] work [not their farm program], which will enable us to become more cost-effective in the future”. Moreover, FWI highlights its future potential as the best reason for supporting them. [...]