I would choose your statement over the current one.
I think the sentiment lands pretty well even with a very toned down statement. The movement is called “effective altruism”. I think often in groups are worried that outgroups will not get their core differences when generally that’s all outgroups know about them.
I don’t think that anyone who visits that website won’t think that effectiveness isn’t a core feature. And I don’t think we need to be patronising (as EAs are charactured as being in conversations I have) in order to make known something that everyone already knows.
I would choose your statement over the current one.
I think the sentiment lands pretty well even with a very toned down statement. The movement is called “effective altruism”. I think often in groups are worried that outgroups will not get their core differences when generally that’s all outgroups know about them.
I don’t think that anyone who visits that website won’t think that effectiveness isn’t a core feature. And I don’t think we need to be patronising (as EAs are charactured as being in conversations I have) in order to make known something that everyone already knows.