That’s actually quite an awkward ambiguity; whether or not the pledge receives the proposed revision it would be good to clear this up.
Even just dropping the comma before “now” might work for that. Perhaps at that point replacing “now” with “today” would make it read better. But that’s just a minimal change; it might be you can do better by rearranging it further.
That’s actually quite an awkward ambiguity; whether or not the pledge receives the proposed revision it would be good to clear this up.
Even just dropping the comma before “now” might work for that. Perhaps at that point replacing “now” with “today” would make it read better. But that’s just a minimal change; it might be you can do better by rearranging it further.