Ryan, thank you, these are really helpful suggestions! Much appreciated :-)
I have edited the post to account for all three of your points:
1) Added a summary at the top
2) Removed the sentence clause about voting habits
3) Solicited questions about reservations, and highlighted that we are committed to moving forward in a collaborative truth-seeking manner about what would optimize human flourishing.
Ryan, thank you, these are really helpful suggestions! Much appreciated :-)
I have edited the post to account for all three of your points:
1) Added a summary at the top 2) Removed the sentence clause about voting habits 3) Solicited questions about reservations, and highlighted that we are committed to moving forward in a collaborative truth-seeking manner about what would optimize human flourishing.
Thanks again!