There’s other things that make this look different than a 100% polished page.
The about page on Open Phil is pretty dense with text.
In contrast, if you go to the above sites, for example, the Gates site, there’s a lot more visuals and “roominess”:
Our Story | Bill & Melinda Gates Foundation
(I don’t have any prior interest or affinity to the Gates foundation, it just seems like a good reference).
In contrast, Open Phil’s about page is text heavy without pictures, and also the text doesn’t flow as naturally.
Each of these changes individually seem small, but I think there’s many details like this.
I think they might add up and justify getting a designer to spend a lot of time doing revisions.
As mentioned in the top comment, a full redo might be valuable.
I think I’m 20-50% certain about what I said in these comments.
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There’s other things that make this look different than a 100% polished page.
The about page on Open Phil is pretty dense with text.
In contrast, if you go to the above sites, for example, the Gates site, there’s a lot more visuals and “roominess”:
Our Story | Bill & Melinda Gates Foundation
(I don’t have any prior interest or affinity to the Gates foundation, it just seems like a good reference).
In contrast, Open Phil’s about page is text heavy without pictures, and also the text doesn’t flow as naturally.
Each of these changes individually seem small, but I think there’s many details like this.
I think they might add up and justify getting a designer to spend a lot of time doing revisions.
As mentioned in the top comment, a full redo might be valuable.
I think I’m 20-50% certain about what I said in these comments.