Hi ! Adressing tipping points is an interesting topic. It’s good to know that they alone won’t cause extreme warming (even though yes, we ought to be cautious).
Have you looked into tipping points for the topic of biodiversity collapse, or for societal collapse ? (I adress societal collapse a bit in post 2 of this series)
Hi Corentin. Thanks for the comments. I plan to also look more into biodiversity and societal tipping points, but I haven’t yet found the time.
Concerning the reformating, maybe it’s just me, but I have a much harder time reading those executive summary style posts and therefore I would rather leave it the way it is.
Concerning the reformating, maybe it’s just me, but I have a much harder time reading those executive summary style posts and therefore I would rather leave it the way it is.
Wow, that’s surprising. Does this include even adding line breaks ?
Hi ! Adressing tipping points is an interesting topic. It’s good to know that they alone won’t cause extreme warming (even though yes, we ought to be cautious).
Have you looked into tipping points for the topic of biodiversity collapse, or for societal collapse ? (I adress societal collapse a bit in post 2 of this series)
As an aside, may I suggest improving the formatting a bit? I felt quite threatened by the size of the paragraphs. I think the post could benefit from shorter paragraphs, using bolding, bullet points. This post provides some advice: https://​​forum.effectivealtruism.org/​​posts/​​dHHuEYdbMqBf2deyj/​​using-the-executive-summary-style-writing-that-respects-your
Hi Corentin. Thanks for the comments. I plan to also look more into biodiversity and societal tipping points, but I haven’t yet found the time.
Concerning the reformating, maybe it’s just me, but I have a much harder time reading those executive summary style posts and therefore I would rather leave it the way it is.
Wow, that’s surprising. Does this include even adding line breaks ?
Or some bolding ?
Hmm I feel like this is already a lot of line breaks. Most of the paragraphs are only ~ 5 sentences or less.
And at least for me bolding breaks the reading flow.