Thanks for the feedback. I think the word “missteps” is too presumptive for the reasons you outlined, and I’ve changed it to “decisions.” I also added a caveat noting that the controversies he’s provoked may lead to his ideas becoming better-known generally (though it’s really hard to determine the overall effect).
Thanks for the feedback. I think the word “missteps” is too presumptive for the reasons you outlined, and I’ve changed it to “decisions.” I also added a caveat noting that the controversies he’s provoked may lead to his ideas becoming better-known generally (though it’s really hard to determine the overall effect).