Awesome comment, Max—thanks for this very thoughtful response. (Minor: you may want to have shorter paragraphs—to partition the text more—to increase readability.)
Minor: you may want to have shorter paragraphs—to partition the text more—to increase readability.
Thank you, I much appreciate specific suggestions. This makes sense to me, and I’ll try to keep it in mind for future posts.
Awesome comment, Max—thanks for this very thoughtful response. (Minor: you may want to have shorter paragraphs—to partition the text more—to increase readability.)
Thank you, I much appreciate specific suggestions. This makes sense to me, and I’ll try to keep it in mind for future posts.