I could be mistaken, but I feel as if that would completely change it into a different sort of thing. I admit it would be a thing that I-personally would probably like more, but I feel it would also remove all the power the story currently possesses. I feel as if this would be removing a thing from existence and replacing it with a new and different thing, instead of improving a thing—and this is clearly a popular thing, since it’s the second-highest-rated submission to the contest, so far.
I feel as if this would be removing a thing from existence and replacing it with a new and different thing, instead of improving a thing
Yeah I was imagining it as a different storyline rather than the same thing. I personally like Lizka’s story as-is, except for the convoluted lumberjack vs small tree metaphor.
I could be mistaken, but I feel as if that would completely change it into a different sort of thing. I admit it would be a thing that I-personally would probably like more, but I feel it would also remove all the power the story currently possesses. I feel as if this would be removing a thing from existence and replacing it with a new and different thing, instead of improving a thing—and this is clearly a popular thing, since it’s the second-highest-rated submission to the contest, so far.
Yeah I was imagining it as a different storyline rather than the same thing. I personally like Lizka’s story as-is, except for the convoluted lumberjack vs small tree metaphor.
I am commenting purely to let you know that one of the thumbs-up on your post is mine.
Wait there’s a more highly-rated submission?
Last I saw, “The Reset Button” was leading it by one vote.