Oh sorry! When I wrote that, I wasn’t trying to take a position on whether the actual content/thinking was determined by AI. I just wanted to emphasize that the degree of AI involvement wasn’t minor, like just use AI for grammar and typo checks.
That said, I believe a lot of human effort was also put into the text, and almost certainly the very high-level structure/arguments/ideas came from humans.
I don’t have a strong position on whether the thinking/content was determined by AI. And the evidence doesn’t really let us rule out either hypothesis.
If you’re fine with speculations, my guess is that the answer is “no” for a strong definition of “determined”, but “yes” for a weaker claim like “meaningfully affected.”
In particular I think AI is able to smooth over language far more than they can substitute for actually good thinking, at least as of mid-2026. So (speculating) there are probably subsections where the Vatican wanted to say something in the outline/early drafts but it doesn’t quite look right (because the thinking isn’t quite right), and they were able to smooth it over using AI to seem palatable in “group sycophancy” ways. And the final thinking would’ve been clearer if they forced themselves to rewrite/think over things until it could sound smooth with human levels of clear thinking/polish tradeoffs, rather than AI-assisted levels.
But this is just speculation, of course.
Some other people in our circles have already complained about things that didn’t quite make sense in parts touching on AI ethics and AI consciousness. But ignoring that (obviously the Vatican has various biases, and so does our crowd), I thought the Babel/Nehemiah contrastive pair (Par 7-10) had a sort of artificiality to it. Like it sounded nice (unless you’re allergic to AI public writing, like me), but if you actually drilled down into what the metaphor was doing and then critically contrasted it with either a) a plain-language reading of the Biblical stories themselves or b) how people historically talked about Nehemiah, or c) what goes on in the world of AI right now, it doesn’t quite make sense.