Aaron Gertler 🔸 comments on I’ll Fund You to Give Away ‘Doing Good Better’ - Surprisingly Effective?

[Aaron Gertler 🔸]

That version does sound better. One more suggested version:

Thank you for taking the time to share what you’ve done. Since we also asked about your future plans, could we follow up with one more short survey a year from now, to see what happened?

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I’m hoping this feels a bit less high-pressure than “what you may still do”, but you could also remove “to see what happened” to help with that.

[Jeremy]

I see what you’re saying, but I (intentionally) didn’t ask about future plans so I’m not sure if that part works. While I definitely don’t want it to be high pressure, I do want to somehow emphasize the importance of tracking future actions. I wonder if this strikes a balance.

Thank you for taking the time to share what you have done. In order to help us understand the longer-term impact of the book, would you mind if we followed up with another short survey a year from now? If that’s alright, please enter your email address below—it will not be shared with anyone, or used for any other purpose.

I really appreciate you taking the time to back-and-forth with me about this!

[Aaron Gertler 🔸]

I like that wording, and don’t have any changes to suggest.