I agree with MichaelA’s note about “room for improvement” sounding sanitized and corporate (in a context where an organization is describing itself or its own movement). “We have some room for improvement, and we’re working on it” is boilerplate stuff that any organization could write; “we have some flaws and we want to fix them” doesn’t give me the same “generic” feeling.
I agree with MichaelA’s note about “room for improvement” sounding sanitized and corporate (in a context where an organization is describing itself or its own movement). “We have some room for improvement, and we’re working on it” is boilerplate stuff that any organization could write; “we have some flaws and we want to fix them” doesn’t give me the same “generic” feeling.