I agree to an extent, in that I think that strictly speaking it would have been better to say “we seek to reform pesticide use” or “we are working on reforming pesticide use”. I wonder if you would have found that acceptable?
Yes, we think both of those wordings would have been acceptable. Ideally, though, the organization would also clarify what it’s actually doing to try to reform pesticide use—whether that’s creating content, conducting research, or something else.
I agree to an extent, in that I think that strictly speaking it would have been better to say “we seek to reform pesticide use” or “we are working on reforming pesticide use”. I wonder if you would have found that acceptable?
Thanks for the comment, Hugh.
Yes, we think both of those wordings would have been acceptable. Ideally, though, the organization would also clarify what it’s actually doing to try to reform pesticide use—whether that’s creating content, conducting research, or something else.