I agree that there is some framing and language that could be changed to make people more likely to engage and to be convinced by the arguments (which are very important!). There were parts that I found quite annoying, especially at the end, that could easily be left out without damaging any of the content. To reiterate, I’m glad this was posted and appreciate it being written down, I just think some stylistic changes could have improved it
I agree that there is some framing and language that could be changed to make people more likely to engage and to be convinced by the arguments (which are very important!). There were parts that I found quite annoying, especially at the end, that could easily be left out without damaging any of the content. To reiterate, I’m glad this was posted and appreciate it being written down, I just think some stylistic changes could have improved it