I like the first 2 of your examples actually, but the next 3 are bad yes.
I think Joseph is pointing out the ’s in the first example, the added “the” in the second
gotcha it’s the grammar fair...
I like the first 2 of your examples actually, but the next 3 are bad yes.
I think Joseph is pointing out the ’s in the first example, the added “the” in the second
gotcha it’s the grammar fair...