All of these sound super exciting. Small note- the website for First Embrace is pretty scrappy-feeling and there’s a reasonable number of spelling/grammar issues which, were I not already familiar with AIM’s work, would (?unfairly) make me less confident in the charity itself.
Examples:
“Mother’s act as their baby’s incubator”
“KMC saves babies lives and then gives them the a head start on development.”
“We want to help as many people as we can, as much as possible, who wouldn’t otherwise have been helped without or work.”
“We’re flexible to the best way of making impact as possible.”
“where he was also learned about research design learned about policy translation”
I appreciate that I might be unusually sensitive to this kind of thing but seems like an easy win to me :) excited to see more of your work!
All of these sound super exciting. Small note- the website for First Embrace is pretty scrappy-feeling and there’s a reasonable number of spelling/grammar issues which, were I not already familiar with AIM’s work, would (?unfairly) make me less confident in the charity itself.
Examples:
“Mother’s act as their baby’s incubator”
“KMC saves babies lives and then gives them the a head start on development.”
“We want to help as many people as we can, as much as possible, who wouldn’t otherwise have been helped without or work.”
“We’re flexible to the best way of making impact as possible.”
“where he was also learned about research design learned about policy translation”
I appreciate that I might be unusually sensitive to this kind of thing but seems like an easy win to me :) excited to see more of your work!
thank you Joseph, I’ve resolved these.
I like the first 2 of your examples actually, but the next 3 are bad yes.
I think Joseph is pointing out the ’s in the first example, the added “the” in the second
gotcha it’s the grammar fair...