Don’t get me wrong, I just think this is an extremely uncharitable and confusing way of presenting your work.
I think it’s otherwise a great collection of coherence theorems and the discussion about completeness seems alright, though I haven’t read closely.
Using ‘coherence theorems’ with a meaning that is as standard as any, and explaining that meaning within two sentences, seems fine to me.
Don’t get me wrong, I just think this is an extremely uncharitable and confusing way of presenting your work.
I think it’s otherwise a great collection of coherence theorems and the discussion about completeness seems alright, though I haven’t read closely.
Using ‘coherence theorems’ with a meaning that is as standard as any, and explaining that meaning within two sentences, seems fine to me.