Two very small bits of feedback based only on this post, without having watched the videos yet:
When cross-posting, I think it’s good to include a link in each post to the other version, at the bottom or the top. That way a reader can also check out the comments there as well if the reader wants. You did mention the LW post, which helps (compared to not mentioning it at all), but it’s still nice to have the link.
I suggest changing the colour of the writing on the person’s arm to something other than red. My brain processed the red as like the writing being scratched/cut into the arm, which I assume isn’t what you’re going for and gives a quite different vibe. (I’d guess 5-40% of people would process it the same way, though maybe it’s a rarer reaction than I think.)
Two very small bits of feedback based only on this post, without having watched the videos yet:
When cross-posting, I think it’s good to include a link in each post to the other version, at the bottom or the top. That way a reader can also check out the comments there as well if the reader wants. You did mention the LW post, which helps (compared to not mentioning it at all), but it’s still nice to have the link.
I suggest changing the colour of the writing on the person’s arm to something other than red. My brain processed the red as like the writing being scratched/cut into the arm, which I assume isn’t what you’re going for and gives a quite different vibe. (I’d guess 5-40% of people would process it the same way, though maybe it’s a rarer reaction than I think.)
Thanks, edited both here an on LW. Interesting feedback about the arm, but I’m also considering removing the arm entirely.