Well I have spend like an hour on your post and only just found the policy proposals. Why not put them at the top? Or with a heading?
Also I don’t really see what your policies have to do with ending poverty—seems like if successful these would be taken up in the west and then there would still be huge amounts of poverty.
I agree that many people will downvote your piece without reading it (though many will upvote for the same reason, and it seems there is some of both going on here) but I really did try and read it and it was soooooo long and very unclear. Maybe my thoughts don’t matter to you, but if you want my advice, clear writing involves the audience taking away what you intended from the piece. I don’t think you’ve succeed with me, despite my spending 30 − 60 minutes on it.
Well I have spend like an hour on your post and only just found the policy proposals. Why not put them at the top? Or with a heading?
Also I don’t really see what your policies have to do with ending poverty—seems like if successful these would be taken up in the west and then there would still be huge amounts of poverty.
I agree that many people will downvote your piece without reading it (though many will upvote for the same reason, and it seems there is some of both going on here) but I really did try and read it and it was soooooo long and very unclear. Maybe my thoughts don’t matter to you, but if you want my advice, clear writing involves the audience taking away what you intended from the piece. I don’t think you’ve succeed with me, despite my spending 30 − 60 minutes on it.