I did not say that it’d be good if somebody was a ruthless negotiator.
If you’re going to paraphrase somebody, please be more careful to paraphrase things they actually said, by dereferencing, and not add implications you thought they meant.
I didn’t say I was paraphrasing you, I said I was giving a simplified version. I also pointed out the sentence was not in the original.
Adding in an unflattering sentiment that was not said or clearly implied in the original is not “simplifying”.
Ok, fine, reworded. You can still find the original here.
I did not say that it’d be good if somebody was a ruthless negotiator.
If you’re going to paraphrase somebody, please be more careful to paraphrase things they actually said, by dereferencing, and not add implications you thought they meant.
I didn’t say I was paraphrasing you, I said I was giving a simplified version. I also pointed out the sentence was not in the original.
Adding in an unflattering sentiment that was not said or clearly implied in the original is not “simplifying”.
Ok, fine, reworded. You can still find the original here.