Great post! While I agree with your main claims, I believe the numbers for the multipliers (especially in aggregate and for ex ante impact evaluations) are nowhere near as extreme in reality as your article suggests for the reasons that Brian Tomasik elaborates on in these two articles:
(i) Charity Cost-Effectiveness in an Uncertain World
(ii) Why Charities Usually Don’t Differ Astronomically in Expected Cost-Effectiveness
Brief meta comment: I would generally recommend being very cautious about (and mostly avoid) using language like “converting” others to EA, as in your sentence “Younger people might be easier to convert (...)”. This type of language seems fairly easy to avoid, whiled using it may make many people feel uncomfortable and even pose reputational risks for the community.