(writing personally here, not for any organization)
Some good questions raised here!
I know that EA organizations have thought about this, for example when Giving What We Can was working on the dashboard that would show projected lifetime earnings and donations. I think itâs really hard to provide a broad overview of differences that doesnât sound insulting or over-generalizing.
So much of the wage gap by gender reflects time away from work after having children, and individuals have significant choice over that. For example, I took a lot more leave (from a non-EA job I disliked) with my first child than I did with my second two from my EA job. In the US itâs common to take more like 10 weeks of leave, so the postâs use of a year of maternity leave as the default is pretty different from my experience.
(But I recognize that a lot of choices about how much time to take depends on income, childcare options, the childrenâs needs, and how flexible the parentsâ work is. I donât want to frame it all as completely up to personal preference. For example, my partner and I found ourselves unexpectedly without childcare when our eight-month-old refused to eat at daycare.)
Some non-EA resources that Iâve found at least somewhat helpful:
I Know How She Does It by Laura Vanderkamâbased on working mothersâ time logs, showing how they actually use their time. Both the book and her podcast are definitely aimed at high earners /â high spenders, which I found frustrating at times. But theyâre useful for taking your time seriously. I often find time management advice by non-parents irrelevant, but Vanderkam is a parent of five.
ParentData blog and books by Emily Osterâless about career, but an economist-y take on a bunch of parenting questions.
Selfish Reasons to Have More Kidsâmaybe will help you worry less about things you canât change, but I find thereâs still plenty to worry about.
Sheryl Sandbergâs Lean In is in this genre, but honestly I donât remember any takeaways.
Thanks for sharing, Julia_Wise. I can definitely imagine how hard it is to for provide a broad overview of differences that doesnât sound insulting or over-generalizing, and its good to know that EA organizations have thought about this. Itâs really helpful to think about the non-EA resources tooâIâll take a look!
Thanks for writing this post! I think promoting diversity in EA is incredibly important and I appreciate your contribution to it.
However, I get a feeling here that youâve started with an underlying assumption that âEA should cater to womenâ, which I donât see the argument for. Certainly, if thereâs a stark lack of women throughout EA, Iâd feel that thereâs a problem that needs to be specifically addressedâbut I donât think this is the case.
You present information about the academic fields that correlate with participation in EA, and note that thereâs a gender disparity that matches the one we seem to observe in EA. To me, this seems like evidence that there isnât a problem within EA, but a result of broader, more complicated dynamics elsewhere. On the other hand, the other demographic data you present on other minorities seems like a more significant issue.
For instance, the rest of the 80k article you cite is clear about the fact that the framework isnât applicable to everyone, and I think the choice of whether to have children is just one of many possible reasons the framework might not strictly apply to a person. And while demographic data shows that the work of having children affects women disproportionately, non-women who intend to parent would also need to consider the same unanswered questions.
Because of these dynamics, I donât think that the claim youâve made here, that more resources should be directed in a way that addresses the gender disparity, is substantiated.
Iâm curious to hear from where youâve gotten the sense that the EA community uses a âmale-default positionâ - Iâve never felt this.
(As a side note, if you havenât heard of them, thereâs magnifymentoringâpreviously WANBAM)
The main point that Iâm hoping to convey is that there are women in EA, but that they are not necessarily being catered for. That is to say, that in theory you could have an EA community comprised 100% of women, but if the content is not cognisant of their needs (i.e., advice is not tailored to them, or research does not consider them, when it ought to), then that in itself is not a good thing. If you do not agree with the assumption that women (and other groups) have specific needs/â considerations, then perhaps that is where our values & assumptions differ.
I agree that the 80k framework isnât suitable for everyone, but in which case I argue that this should be made explicit. I also agree that some of the issues presented are partially the result of broader, more complicated dynamics elsewhereâbut I donât think that is an excuse not to consider or address them. Finally, I fully concur that the demographic data I present on other minorities seems like significant issue (although I would not argue that is it more so). It would be great to see some further writing on those issues.
Thank you for letting me know about magnifymentoring, I hadnât come across them in my searches but Iâll take a look and edit if required.
When I poke my brain for prominent âcentrally EAâ effective altruists I know or know of, the first four that come to mind (Kelsey Piper, Miranda Dixon-Luinenberg, Julia Galef, Ajeya Cotra) are women who write things.
This is doubtless more a function of what I read and which specific circles I walk in than something that holds universally, but it wouldnât surprise me if most of the EA people in my particular corner of the scene gave overlapping names. That combined with the negative association I have with the word âcaterâ that you seem to lack (maybe itâs an American English thing? to me, âto cater toâ means âto put before others, to treat obsequiouslyâ), made my initial reaction very much in line with smallsiloâs.
Ah interesting, I hadnât considered that âcaterâ might be construed differently elsewhere! In British English, it just means âto provide what is wanted or needed by someone or somethingâ (or alternatively, to provide food -which isnât the meaning I was using here). So, the title would literally mean âdoes EA provide what is wanted or needed by women?â
Good point re: Kelsey Piper, Miranda Dixon-Luinenberg, Julia Galef, Ajeya Cotra. I hadnât considered e.g., The Scout Mindset becausein my mind it isnât EA-specific as a book (even thought its used by the EA community), but that might be an oversight on my partâperhaps I was thinking too narrowly about EA literature with that particular example.
As a woman whoâs been involved in EA for a long time, I agree with parts of this post, but I also find parts of it make frustrating assumptions. For example, I know several men in the EA community taking time off work or planning to take time off work in order to raise their children. If your hypothesis is correct and EA is focused on the male experience, why wouldnât it include them?
I think a more likely explanation is that these topics are hard to think and write about and no oneâs managed to do it yet. Up until a couple years ago, there were only a couple thousand EAs globallyâso when I see an article that should exist but doesnât, my first reaction is thereâs a gap because no oneâs had time to do the topic justice, not that the community doesnât care.
Strong upvoted. This got me to ponder the thought experiment of imagining an EA community that assumed members and interested people were female by default. I do think that EA content would look somewhat different in that world, primarily in addressing questions about kids. Iâd expect that advice and discussion about whether, when, and how to have and raise kids would be a very prominent topic. I might expect talent-contained EA orgs to try and differentiate themselves through perks like on-site childcare. I might also expect more weird and out there stuff thatâs targeted at related questions, like maybe in that world, youâd see posts arguing that the most impactful career you can have is being a competent and value-aligned nanny for another EA.
Imagining that world gives me a sense of how the current world looks somewhat male by default, and where we might look to change that.
This has a lot of good thinking and good research, and more people should see it.
I almost didnât read this because of the title; I imagine that twelve people bounced off right there for every person who clicked the link, and if asked for advice Iâd recommend changing the title to something more indicative of the post itself such as: âCommon Advice For EAs Doesnât Account For or Analyze the Costs Incurred by Women in Childrearingâ (or something pithier to the same general effect).
In particular Iâd avoid the word cater, it comes across as value-laden and negative. I initially expected this post to be written by an angry man.
It would also greatly benefit from a concise Key Takeaways at the top, as One-time pad and Guy Raveh have already said. That would also signal to the reader what theyâre going to read, which is important because people need to make a snap judgement about whether itâs worth their time to continue.
(Iâm always awkward around giving advice; if any of this seems brusque or rude please know that it wasnât intended that way and I appreciated the article.
This opening
According to a flagship Effective Altruism (EA) organisation, you have 80,000 hours in your career over a lifetime: 40 hours per week, 50 weeks per year, for 40 years. But does this hold true for women? And if not, what are the implications of this (and related assumptions) for the EA research community and the practical EA community?
is almost perfectly designed to not be read. When I first read the post, my eyes skimmed through this without my brain processing it. I would have read it, if it had been written in normal font and if it were not above what looks like a stock photo.
Upon rereading it, I agree with my brainâs initial learned heuristic of not parsing things written in heading text above what look like stock photos. Donât waste peopleâs time beating around the bush or burying the lede, people want to know what theyâre reading as soon as possible so that they know if they should read it through and pick over the particulars.
If Iâd written it, the opening would read:
A key assumption in 80,000 hoursâ advice is that you have 80,000 hours in your career over a lifetime: 40 hours a week, 50 weeks a year, for 40 years. But this doesnât hold for women, who swallow the larger half of the opportunity cost inherent to raising children.
take whatever from that you find helpful, and disregard whatever sounds to you clunky.
Moving on:
This post looks to explore the following 3 questions:
a) Does EA cater to women, as both a research field and a practical community?
b) If not, what (if any) female-specific considerations ought to be taken into
account by EA?
c)What (if any) practical steps can be taken to ensure that EA is more inclusive
of women, and considerate of womenâs lives?
This is another point where as I reader I might have jumped off. You arenât being paid by how long we stay on this webpage before clicking away! Thereâs no reason to imitate the style of websites which are paid by how long people have to stay on the webpage afore they can tell what theyâre reading. This is safe to cut.
In seeking to answer these questions, this article does the following:
Thank you for spending the time writing such detailed feedback Lumpyproletariat!This is the first ever blog-style post Iâd written (and first contribution to the EA Forum), so itâs incredibly helpful that youâve pointed out specific examples and provided alternativesâitâs helped me to see exactly what I can adjust in future. I can see for example how much more digestible the âTable of Contentsâ is the way that youâve drafted it (and how much more cognitive load it requires to read the âIn seeking to answer these questions [...] part as it is currently). Appreciate it a lot!
(If I had more time, Iâd look into the claim about delaying children leading to more successful careers to see if itâs something I need to quibble about; it feels like the sort of claim that might have correlation and causation confused. But I do not have the time to get into the weeds on this or any other point and for all I know it could be a perfectly good study. I hope more people see this article so that non-busy people can look into that!)
The âCareer progression and earning potentialâ section was so difficult to read; I know the point is to raise awareness about expectation-setting and not viewing men as default, but the point that sticks in my mind is the old âhaving kids is a career killer.â
As a woman on the fence about having kids, the thought of literally making the world worse (not saving 6.8 lives) for something that would also damage my career is...so awful. Calling this information to othersâ attention needs to be done with care to avoid the sort of âwomen are less valuable EAs according to mathâ conclusion. I know this isnât the conclusion, and I know we care about the same problem (women doing well in EA). But I found this post profoundly discouraging.
Perhaps youâve seen these things already if youâre thinking about having kids, but Julia Wise and Jeff Kaufman have written about their decision to be parents and their experiences parenting extensively. The stuff I could find that addresses the question of making the decision:
I canât figure out why this didnât get more traction. This post seems extremely relevant and brought up well considered points that Iâm surprised Iâve never encountered before. This subject seems fundamental to life changing career decisions, and highly relevant to both EA earning to give and EA career impacts. I also canât spot any surface level presentation reasons it might have gotten overlooked or prematurely dismissed.
Edit: Ah, I think what happened is it was evaluated by the suggested actions when scrolling to see the outcomes/âresults. I am also much less positive these are good approaches to addressing the problem. They are offered without much evidence, and transparently acknowledged as such, but itâs potentially the posts biggest most obvious fault.
Thanks for bringing these issues out. I think your case that EA participation is not very diverse is strong.
I think youâre right that spending money has to be part of the solution.
My own suggestion would be some kind of survey or study of underrepresented groups to gather more information about why they participate, barriers they see or experience etc.
This could be a good first step if it doesnât exist already?
Edited to addâif it turns out a survey is a good idea, Iâm happy to help.
Thanks for the feedback One-time pad. I was aiming to be as comprehensive as possible, as I hadnât found comparable articles before. My hope was that the links/â signposting to different sections and the exec summary would helpâbut its helpful to know that wasnât the case for you (and presumably others). Unless it was the writing itself that was not concise (rather than the length of the piece), in which case Iâd welcome suggestions on what might work better!
(writing personally here, not for any organization)
Some good questions raised here!
I know that EA organizations have thought about this, for example when Giving What We Can was working on the dashboard that would show projected lifetime earnings and donations. I think itâs really hard to provide a broad overview of differences that doesnât sound insulting or over-generalizing.
So much of the wage gap by gender reflects time away from work after having children, and individuals have significant choice over that. For example, I took a lot more leave (from a non-EA job I disliked) with my first child than I did with my second two from my EA job. In the US itâs common to take more like 10 weeks of leave, so the postâs use of a year of maternity leave as the default is pretty different from my experience.
(But I recognize that a lot of choices about how much time to take depends on income, childcare options, the childrenâs needs, and how flexible the parentsâ work is. I donât want to frame it all as completely up to personal preference. For example, my partner and I found ourselves unexpectedly without childcare when our eight-month-old refused to eat at daycare.)
On the informal side, there are groups for women and nonbinary people in EA and parents (and people considering parenting) in EA.
Some non-EA resources that Iâve found at least somewhat helpful:
I Know How She Does It by Laura Vanderkamâbased on working mothersâ time logs, showing how they actually use their time. Both the book and her podcast are definitely aimed at high earners /â high spenders, which I found frustrating at times. But theyâre useful for taking your time seriously. I often find time management advice by non-parents irrelevant, but Vanderkam is a parent of five.
ParentData blog and books by Emily Osterâless about career, but an economist-y take on a bunch of parenting questions.
Selfish Reasons to Have More Kidsâmaybe will help you worry less about things you canât change, but I find thereâs still plenty to worry about.
Sheryl Sandbergâs Lean In is in this genre, but honestly I donât remember any takeaways.
And some pieces by EAs about parenting:
Parenting: things I wish I could tell my past self, Michelle Hutchinson
How to be productive before your baby turns one, Ruth Grace
My experience returning to work after having a baby, Rose Hadshar
Equal parenting advice for dads, Jeff Kaufman (plus lots of his other parenting posts)
Parenting and effective altruism, Bernadette Young
How much will pregnancy affect your health and work? me
What startup founders should think about before having kids me
How much do kids cost? The first 5 years me
More posts by EAs
Thanks for sharing, Julia_Wise. I can definitely imagine how hard it is to for provide a broad overview of differences that doesnât sound insulting or over-generalizing, and its good to know that EA organizations have thought about this. Itâs really helpful to think about the non-EA resources tooâIâll take a look!
Thanks for writing this post! I think promoting diversity in EA is incredibly important and I appreciate your contribution to it.
However, I get a feeling here that youâve started with an underlying assumption that âEA should cater to womenâ, which I donât see the argument for. Certainly, if thereâs a stark lack of women throughout EA, Iâd feel that thereâs a problem that needs to be specifically addressedâbut I donât think this is the case.
You present information about the academic fields that correlate with participation in EA, and note that thereâs a gender disparity that matches the one we seem to observe in EA. To me, this seems like evidence that there isnât a problem within EA, but a result of broader, more complicated dynamics elsewhere. On the other hand, the other demographic data you present on other minorities seems like a more significant issue.
For instance, the rest of the 80k article you cite is clear about the fact that the framework isnât applicable to everyone, and I think the choice of whether to have children is just one of many possible reasons the framework might not strictly apply to a person. And while demographic data shows that the work of having children affects women disproportionately, non-women who intend to parent would also need to consider the same unanswered questions.
Because of these dynamics, I donât think that the claim youâve made here, that more resources should be directed in a way that addresses the gender disparity, is substantiated.
Iâm curious to hear from where youâve gotten the sense that the EA community uses a âmale-default positionâ - Iâve never felt this.
(As a side note, if you havenât heard of them, thereâs magnifymentoringâpreviously WANBAM)
Hi smallsilo,
Thank you for your feedback, it is appreciated.
It is fair to say that a key assumption of the article is EA should cater to everyone, and therefore it should also cater to women.
My central argument is not that there is stark lack of women throughout EA (conversely, I recognise for example that CEA notes that from 2017-2020, their staff gender balance has been roughly equal between women and men). However, there do appear to be a stark lack of women at the front and centre of EA who e.g., write key books. It is also clear that EAs are still disproportionately male.
The main point that Iâm hoping to convey is that there are women in EA, but that they are not necessarily being catered for. That is to say, that in theory you could have an EA community comprised 100% of women, but if the content is not cognisant of their needs (i.e., advice is not tailored to them, or research does not consider them, when it ought to), then that in itself is not a good thing. If you do not agree with the assumption that women (and other groups) have specific needs/â considerations, then perhaps that is where our values & assumptions differ.
I agree that the 80k framework isnât suitable for everyone, but in which case I argue that this should be made explicit. I also agree that some of the issues presented are partially the result of broader, more complicated dynamics elsewhereâbut I donât think that is an excuse not to consider or address them. Finally, I fully concur that the demographic data I present on other minorities seems like significant issue (although I would not argue that is it more so). It would be great to see some further writing on those issues.
Thank you for letting me know about magnifymentoring, I hadnât come across them in my searches but Iâll take a look and edit if required.
When I poke my brain for prominent âcentrally EAâ effective altruists I know or know of, the first four that come to mind (Kelsey Piper, Miranda Dixon-Luinenberg, Julia Galef, Ajeya Cotra) are women who write things.
This is doubtless more a function of what I read and which specific circles I walk in than something that holds universally, but it wouldnât surprise me if most of the EA people in my particular corner of the scene gave overlapping names. That combined with the negative association I have with the word âcaterâ that you seem to lack (maybe itâs an American English thing? to me, âto cater toâ means âto put before others, to treat obsequiouslyâ), made my initial reaction very much in line with smallsiloâs.
Ah interesting, I hadnât considered that âcaterâ might be construed differently elsewhere! In British English, it just means âto provide what is wanted or needed by someone or somethingâ (or alternatively, to provide food -which isnât the meaning I was using here). So, the title would literally mean âdoes EA provide what is wanted or needed by women?â
Good point re: Kelsey Piper, Miranda Dixon-Luinenberg, Julia Galef, Ajeya Cotra. I hadnât considered e.g., The Scout Mindset because in my mind it isnât EA-specific as a book (even thought its used by the EA community), but that might be an oversight on my partâperhaps I was thinking too narrowly about EA literature with that particular example.
I think âdoes EA provide what is wanted or needed by women?â is a pretty serviceable title; two nations divided by a common language and such.
As a woman whoâs been involved in EA for a long time, I agree with parts of this post, but I also find parts of it make frustrating assumptions. For example, I know several men in the EA community taking time off work or planning to take time off work in order to raise their children. If your hypothesis is correct and EA is focused on the male experience, why wouldnât it include them?
I think a more likely explanation is that these topics are hard to think and write about and no oneâs managed to do it yet. Up until a couple years ago, there were only a couple thousand EAs globallyâso when I see an article that should exist but doesnât, my first reaction is thereâs a gap because no oneâs had time to do the topic justice, not that the community doesnât care.
Strong upvoted. This got me to ponder the thought experiment of imagining an EA community that assumed members and interested people were female by default. I do think that EA content would look somewhat different in that world, primarily in addressing questions about kids. Iâd expect that advice and discussion about whether, when, and how to have and raise kids would be a very prominent topic. I might expect talent-contained EA orgs to try and differentiate themselves through perks like on-site childcare. I might also expect more weird and out there stuff thatâs targeted at related questions, like maybe in that world, youâd see posts arguing that the most impactful career you can have is being a competent and value-aligned nanny for another EA.
Imagining that world gives me a sense of how the current world looks somewhat male by default, and where we might look to change that.
Upvoted.
This has a lot of good thinking and good research, and more people should see it.
I almost didnât read this because of the title; I imagine that twelve people bounced off right there for every person who clicked the link, and if asked for advice Iâd recommend changing the title to something more indicative of the post itself such as: âCommon Advice For EAs Doesnât Account For or Analyze the Costs Incurred by Women in Childrearingâ (or something pithier to the same general effect).
In particular Iâd avoid the word cater, it comes across as value-laden and negative. I initially expected this post to be written by an angry man.
It would also greatly benefit from a concise Key Takeaways at the top, as One-time pad and Guy Raveh have already said. That would also signal to the reader what theyâre going to read, which is important because people need to make a snap judgement about whether itâs worth their time to continue.
(Iâm always awkward around giving advice; if any of this seems brusque or rude please know that it wasnât intended that way and I appreciated the article.
This opening
is almost perfectly designed to not be read. When I first read the post, my eyes skimmed through this without my brain processing it. I would have read it, if it had been written in normal font and if it were not above what looks like a stock photo.
Upon rereading it, I agree with my brainâs initial learned heuristic of not parsing things written in heading text above what look like stock photos. Donât waste peopleâs time beating around the bush or burying the lede, people want to know what theyâre reading as soon as possible so that they know if they should read it through and pick over the particulars.
If Iâd written it, the opening would read:
take whatever from that you find helpful, and disregard whatever sounds to you clunky.
Moving on:
This is another point where as I reader I might have jumped off. You arenât being paid by how long we stay on this webpage before clicking away! Thereâs no reason to imitate the style of websites which are paid by how long people have to stay on the webpage afore they can tell what theyâre reading. This is safe to cut.
Iâd make this clearer and more concise, for example:
I really like this whole part:
And in fact I like the rest of it as well. Once the article hits its stride, it wears its use to the reader on its sleeve.
Thanks for writing it!
Thank you for spending the time writing such detailed feedback Lumpyproletariat! This is the first ever blog-style post Iâd written (and first contribution to the EA Forum), so itâs incredibly helpful that youâve pointed out specific examples and provided alternativesâitâs helped me to see exactly what I can adjust in future. I can see for example how much more digestible the âTable of Contentsâ is the way that youâve drafted it (and how much more cognitive load it requires to read the âIn seeking to answer these questions [...] part as it is currently). Appreciate it a lot!
Iâm very glad to have been of help. :D
(If I had more time, Iâd look into the claim about delaying children leading to more successful careers to see if itâs something I need to quibble about; it feels like the sort of claim that might have correlation and causation confused. But I do not have the time to get into the weeds on this or any other point and for all I know it could be a perfectly good study. I hope more people see this article so that non-busy people can look into that!)
The âCareer progression and earning potentialâ section was so difficult to read; I know the point is to raise awareness about expectation-setting and not viewing men as default, but the point that sticks in my mind is the old âhaving kids is a career killer.â
As a woman on the fence about having kids, the thought of literally making the world worse (not saving 6.8 lives) for something that would also damage my career is...so awful. Calling this information to othersâ attention needs to be done with care to avoid the sort of âwomen are less valuable EAs according to mathâ conclusion. I know this isnât the conclusion, and I know we care about the same problem (women doing well in EA). But I found this post profoundly discouraging.
Perhaps youâve seen these things already if youâre thinking about having kids, but Julia Wise and Jeff Kaufman have written about their decision to be parents and their experiences parenting extensively. The stuff I could find that addresses the question of making the decision:
OK to Have Kids?
Cheerfully
What startup founders should think about before having kids
I canât figure out why this didnât get more traction. This post seems extremely relevant and brought up well considered points that Iâm surprised Iâve never encountered before. This subject seems fundamental to life changing career decisions, and highly relevant to both EA earning to give and EA career impacts. I also canât spot any surface level presentation reasons it might have gotten overlooked or prematurely dismissed.
Edit: Ah, I think what happened is it was evaluated by the suggested actions when scrolling to see the outcomes/âresults. I am also much less positive these are good approaches to addressing the problem. They are offered without much evidence, and transparently acknowledged as such, but itâs potentially the posts biggest most obvious fault.
Excellent post.
Thanks for bringing these issues out. I think your case that EA participation is not very diverse is strong.
I think youâre right that spending money has to be part of the solution.
My own suggestion would be some kind of survey or study of underrepresented groups to gather more information about why they participate, barriers they see or experience etc.
This could be a good first step if it doesnât exist already?
Edited to addâif it turns out a survey is a good idea, Iâm happy to help.
I think this post would do a better job of furthering your (laudable) aims if it was written more concisely.
Iâd really like a TL;DR that includes the conclusions, if someone were kind enough to write one.
Thanks for the feedback One-time pad. I was aiming to be as comprehensive as possible, as I hadnât found comparable articles before. My hope was that the links/â signposting to different sections and the exec summary would helpâbut its helpful to know that wasnât the case for you (and presumably others). Unless it was the writing itself that was not concise (rather than the length of the piece), in which case Iâd welcome suggestions on what might work better!